Denali Valley in Neat Light 2

See, this one I got the foreground alright, but the rest of it is sort of mediocre. The major difference being that I pencilled in the shapes in the first picture and tried to go freehand in the second picture.

Not that me critiquing my own art is really an excercise I need to do publicly. But I suppose it is useful enough for me to do for my own self. I'm going to post the actual photo and then make a third attempt. The actual photo is really cool.